Last week we had crit with Tina. It went very well, she made some very useful comments on how to improve the installation: a) to add a wall, so the space is more private b) delete the text from the footage, as you can not read it, and it’s not relevant c) have more paper cranes.
b)All of these comments were useful, as now I have edited the footage so it looks smooth and relevant.
a)I have made a decision to add an extra wall to the space I have worked already in, so the piece is not destructed. As well as I am going to paint the floor white.
c) this point, was my aim from the beginning, so now I am working on the quantity of paper cranes.